Since you were great public (even though not in a great number, but smaller and good audience is better than bigger and bad) I decided to put two more.
I still hope for some good comments.
First one was made after reading Poe's "Ligeia".
The other one just came up put of nowhere. :rolleyes:
ROSE FOR THE DEAD
Approaching the altar where dead people lye,
Watching the others as they try to cry,
Tears of sorrow and remembrance for thee,
They are just pretending, I can see.
Your body lying on the bed of roses,
And your soul in vain upon it closes,
Dressed in white, your silhouette rise,
Through gracious light your beauty shine.
Snow white skin in the dawn of night,
And the lenghtening shadow in the mist of light,
Your eyes still burning in the rage of life,
Fighting in coffin subsonscoius endless strife.
Bowing my eyes in respect for the dead,
And throwing the rose on your finally bed,
I couldn't watch shadow of death arrive,
Sweet sorrow, they had buried you alive.
ESCAPE FROM DELIRIUM
Darkness surrounds you, a strange place,
Visions fearful and funny, a delirium trace,
Shapes of horror, machines of pain,
Try to run away, try to stay sane,
Out you run, out you hide,
But it follows you, it's your guide,
This nightmare, this mind dreaming,
It's always there, and it makes you go screaming,
Escape, run, follow the path,
Do anything to hide from the wrath,
Of the delirium that haunts you day by day,
Of the nightmare that always makes you pay,
The price of being sane!