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« Reply #40 on: 22 August 2005, 07:47:02 »

OHHHHHHHH GREAT ALSO THIS ONE!!!

It's so ethereal, lost and bleak...wonderful...yes, you're inspired by Morten words, but....why not??? It's original however...

i love what Ovidius says:

‘Oh my dear’, he said, ‘do not feel sad
And do not spare the darkness that fills your heart
For your eyes do not deserve the color of the night
You are as pure as the moon which shines
Even if its brightness is eclipsed by the dark clouds
Do not let your beauty to be abolished by the bleakness you feel
For your arch lover does not deserve your fall!’

‘Corruption, destruction, an endless fight
A dream as evil as it is alive
A dreaded sin I feel growing has erased my mind
I can still see the anxiety in her eyes…
Her poisoned laughter had unleashed my aversion
I couldn’t speak but hear their words
And ‘twas those words which made me break apart…’

but i don't understand something: does she die al last? :huh:
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« Reply #41 on: 22 August 2005, 07:59:01 »

firstly this part is the girl's:

‘Corruption, destruction, an endless fight
A dream as evil as it is alive
A dreaded sin I feel growing has erased my mind
I can still see the anxiety in her eyes…
Her poisoned laughter had unleashed my aversion
I couldn’t speak but hear their words
And ‘twas those words which made me break apart…’

and yes, in the end she dies.

"But alas her doom had already reached her". :)

as for my inspiration from Morten... all i inspired from his lyrics was the title. the rest is wrote with my usual language :) i'm glad you liked it and thank you for the comment!
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« Reply #42 on: 22 August 2005, 11:18:24 »

okkei now it's clearer, thank you Zeraphine!!! Post your wonderful works again please!!!

now my last work, wrote this morning...i was inspired by a story that i read yesterday, a story about a killer without victims...his name...

His name is Fallen


His name is Fallen
And he comes through the night
Hiding his eyes without a sight
Gripping a dagger in his hand
Searching for someone, to draw an end.

His name is Fallen
And you can’t avoid him
He will find you soon with his grin
With Regret in his gloomy eyes
Death for your heart, not for your life.

His name is Fallen
And he comes relentless as every time
Slowly gait, drawing the last line
He kills you because he musts
And of your past love will remain only dust.

His name is Fallen
And you don’t have to feel pain
Or weeping a lot, it’s always in vain
If you try the eternal illusion
He will shows you the final vision

His name is Fallen
Between the Good and Bad One
He will cease your agony and gone
His grim dagger hangs above
Because he’s the Death, the Death of Love.



i try to write with rhyme and assonaces...mh...maybe it isn't a good work!
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« Reply #43 on: 29 August 2005, 21:26:03 »

Angellore...
It's at the same time beautiful and very sad.......it reminds me one of my  drawing, when you say:

"And there in the mist
You were standing
Surrounded by silence
Like an angel dressed in beauty"


In The Mist
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« Reply #44 on: 31 August 2005, 09:36:32 »

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« Reply #45 on: 23 September 2005, 20:50:31 »

"Where" is stunning...great work Angellore...it reminds me to the drawings of Royo... :wub:  :wub:  :wub:


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« Reply #46 on: 24 September 2005, 13:03:52 »

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"Where" is stunning...great work Angellore...it reminds me to the drawings of Royo... :wub:  :wub:  :wub:

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Like it too... but I haven't known the picture of Royo yet...
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« Reply #47 on: 24 September 2005, 14:18:07 »

Dead, go to Gallery
and starting to be absolutely athonished by this fantastic author!!!


this picture is a backcover of "Malefic" artbook (and i have it!!! :wub: :wub:)...look at the figure...the moon reflecting is in the opposite verse...genial!!! :o  :o  :rolleyes:
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« Reply #48 on: 24 September 2005, 14:49:41 »

I have known Royo..just can't remember that picture... :)
I have a poster of one of his pictures hanging on my wall, but thanks btw.. :)
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« Reply #49 on: 24 September 2005, 19:15:16 »

oh ok...nothing, whenever you want.... ;)

Which one of Royo drawings you have on your wall?
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« Reply #50 on: 24 September 2005, 21:36:03 »

I suppose the most famous one... Millennium. (The "Gothic Angel")
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« Reply #51 on: 24 September 2005, 21:41:07 »

oh ok i understand (i have also this artbook... :) )
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« Reply #52 on: 25 September 2005, 08:32:06 »

I haven't seen that one either :blink:
Royo is great
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« Reply #53 on: 25 September 2005, 09:05:25 »

You haven't seen that one?
http://home.in.tum.de/~hohenber/images/bg/...i_millenium.jpg
Hard to believe.. :)
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« Reply #54 on: 25 September 2005, 10:21:07 »

I know this one :)
I meant the pic that scarlet posted :)
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« Reply #55 on: 25 September 2005, 11:02:26 »

Oh ok...  :)
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« Reply #56 on: 01 October 2005, 22:25:53 »

Angellore.......LOVELY.... :wub: :wub: ...romantic and sad...
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« Reply #57 on: 20 October 2005, 20:12:57 »

ANGELS IN BABYLON

How could you leave me alone
I've seemed not to come along
You pushed me around
And now I'm down
Why do I still love you
though you were so untrue

To love you is like
Waiting for angels in babylon
To love you is like
Searching for angels in babylon

Old memories heart still as new
How could I believe in you
How come your lies to seem so true
After those tears I still won't come trough
There's no life in my body
Your lies made me so cold

Tryin to fight these tears
No sins and no more fears
I leave you though you did before
I won't come again therefore

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« Reply #58 on: 20 October 2005, 20:14:39 »

EVENSKY

Evenair smoothes my skin
Evensky over me
Blue turning into violet
Pink clouds over my head

Let me see
Let me taste
the Evensky
Let me breathe
Let me feel
The Evenair

I roam the lonely streets
No-one's out here
I'm here for me to me
A rush of air into me

A fresh breeze blowing
A feeling of innocence
Sweet blue river's singing
Won't you sing just for me?


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« Reply #59 on: 22 October 2005, 09:45:35 »

Daisy, i really like Angels In Babylon, :wub: i like the theme and the way you wrote it...post more!!! :)
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