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« on: 31 May 2005, 18:24:41 »

well i'm sure many on this site write poetry or lyrics so i created this thread for those who want to share some of their works. i promise i will try to comment a little what will be posted here... waiting anxiously for some replys :)
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« Reply #1 on: 31 May 2005, 21:54:34 »

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well i'm sure many on this site write poetry or lyrics so i created this thread for those who want to share some of their works. i promise i will try to comment a little what will be posted here... waiting anxiously for some replys :)
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Here are some of my works :)
please don't use them without asking, they're mostly lyrics for a couple of songs of my band :)

HOPE LIES BLEEDING

I brought these roses for thee
I dyed them black with the blood of my heart
I tried to be at least someone for thee
I failed I felt and I died

I brought these roses for thee
I dyed them red with the blood of my arms
I tried to give thee all thou want
But trying hard was not enough

Eyes that never see the light
Mouth that once told the truth
Beauty of December’s Night
I was never good enough for you

These roses withered within thy minds
In the deepest darkness thou always went
So frail so fragile so silent
Thou fade away with last starlight
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« Reply #2 on: 31 May 2005, 21:57:49 »

Asphodel Art

1 Cast thy shadow over candlelight
  Pale, in darkness sorrow rises
  Let Enchantress interlude thy night
  For everything that silent dies

2 Cold winter night - an elegy of sorrow
  Her beauty alights the argent stars
  Saturnine suffer with delight within the mourn
  - Thy mercury shine of thousand scars

3 Oh Nocturna, my Selene lost in aeons
  Foregone forever, I'll find thee nevermore
  Within December nights thou art gone
  Lethean waters care dementia of time
 
4 Quintessence of the life
  Carring thee home
  Funeral tomorow
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« Reply #3 on: 31 May 2005, 22:02:54 »

FLOWING AEONS

1 Alight the black fire of flowing passion
  In the sorrow drivin' (drown) lights
  Arcane is might without compassion
  Her everlasting might of oblivion's delight

2 The Pathos of distress romantics
  Crushed by our enemies in time
  Drunken by the poison chalice
  Of lover's blood and bitter wine

3 These days of silent sorrow
  Dark desire gone within the dust
  We set affire our tomorrow
  Like they seared our present
  In the past

4 The razors of her moonlight sword
  - The double razored diamonds
  A kingdom lost, reflection forgotten
  -Begin of new Aeon

5 Arise of debris like a lightning in the night
  Over the ruins of our stolen dreams and lives
  Of phatos, violet nights and dark romantics
  The silent sorrow flows like time
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« Reply #4 on: 31 May 2005, 22:05:21 »

IN THE VIOLET STARLIGHT

Despite the hybrid lines in vain
Structure of the aeons drowns pain
Thou, Shinging beconing Star
An Angel shaped to Shape thy bitter scar

Relit inside arcane blackened light
Beyond lethean waters as above, so inside
Distress thy crystal dress again and again
Thy Invisible circle – everything repeats the same

Thou takes me to the roots
and let me down in abysses
of deepest sorrow in the woods
where thou left me on my own

in thy shade, there was no hope
no way to run and to access
entering the souless grounds
where life is just a daily rope

Where were thee in the times of woe
When my angels were drown...
Where everyone I knew was a fag or a whore
When I gave my life for thee…

… Still see you **** with my soul
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« Reply #5 on: 02 June 2005, 06:48:40 »

glad to see some poems posted in here! i'll them once i have some time to concentrate on them! thank you once more for sharing... and now here's a little something i wrote... it's nothing special but i had to share something too lol...

VIRTUALLY ABOLISHED


The sun arose from the merciless darkness while bathing my window with light
I was better alone in the dark, sleeping…
Dreaming of that illusion to have you in my front…
I would have wished not to feel this way I feel
But what else is there left to do than leaving me enchanted by thee

You were born from a dream, a fantasy…
How should I have known you existed?
A perfect soul and yet so tormented…as I am…
As I am…
That creeping shadow which wanted so to get out of the dark
Was at last released by a solely breath

You came in a time when my scarlet rose was withering
With no hope…no hope in anything…
“Is there someone in this world that can understand me?!” I asked myself
The only nonrhetorical question I have ever asked it seems
For you are here to bring to me my answer…

You are so close to my heart…I can feel you near
And yet you are so far…too far…
Is this the price I must pay for my wish?
For finding thee was my most cherished wish
And it has become true…has it?

I was born from silence and dementia
And cruelly shown to the world
That world which is full of sacrifices to make…
I was tired… so tired…and suddenly a sparkle
You came…

The bitter nostalgia which drowns me in the frustration of not knowing where you are…
Never was I stroke by this feeling of shelter
But how can there be felt shelter when it is not there?
In my hands I hold your pain as you hold mine
But why do I feel as if I’m dead?
Why do I feel this impotence of knowing you will never be there?

The clouds have abolished the sun in my heart
For you are the light but you’re lost in the dark
A dark so immense and so evilly distributed
For between us lies an ocean of sorrow
The sorrow of not knowing…

Shadows are still present in my mind though my most wanted answer has been given
Through my heart passes the light but my eyes still see nothing…
Am I still alone?
I burn in this fire of the unknown
Such a sweet torment and yet so cold…

I feel thy soul but not thy embrace
I see thy eyes as black as the night
But when will I see that spark,
That reflection of my eyes in yours?

…and rain pours as cold as ice
I sink with pain…
…into oblivion.
But you will be here soon for me and enlighten my path…
…and I’ll be waiting…

---there probably are some grammar mistakes over there so please excuse them and i'd love to hear some opinions on it...
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« Reply #6 on: 26 June 2005, 13:16:49 »

This is a lyrics that i wrote and i hope to sing it soon! Sorry but my english it's so simple... <_<


September Midnight

Obscure
As the dark scarlet of a dried rose
Pale
As a moonbeam dancing on a freezing grave
Still
As the shadows of trees on turbulent waters

Feel this scented autumn wind
Absinthe and Cinnamon
A September midnight
When sorceress dance around emerald flames
And their spells run towards a child dream
Nightmare and Shiver

Darkness
Waning in thy daydreams
Tears
Seeping from thy walls of sorrow
Pain
Flying upon thy gather of souls

Hark as thy swansong become a raven’s cry
Melody and Mourn
A cup full of silver tears
When they flow through a widow’s weed
And feed thy flowers of suffering
Frailty and Decay

Still
As the shadows of trees on turbulent waters
Pale
As moonbeam dancing on a freezing grave
Obscure
As the dark scarlet of a dried rose
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« Reply #7 on: 26 June 2005, 13:20:31 »

mh maybe it was better if i don't post it! sorry...All of you write very well...the shame is coming... -_-  :(
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« Reply #8 on: 27 June 2005, 07:00:33 »

well i came here to say sorry i couldn't acomplish my promise... the thing is i am already one of the main commenters on a poetry thread from another forum and it's rather crowded. i barely have time for it...

what i suggest and plead you all is to express some opinions on poems which will be posted in here... some words of encouragement or some small constructive criticism would help a lot the poets posting in here...

now i want to express my opinion on scarletgothica's poem...

my dear your poem is far away from shameful! it's beautiful! the wording is brilliant for a weak english speaker as you say you are and the visuals are quite captivating and brilliantly constructed! i'm very impressed with your work! i would love to read more from you so if you want you can post more in here or send them by PM or not send them at lot if you don't want to lol. in any case keep writting! you're good at it!

hmmm here is something i wrote a week ago after a pause from poetry...

ENTAGLED…
                                        
…IN EVERLASTING FALLS


Waterfalls of bleak emotions embrace my senseless core
I dream as I watch the decay of every single drop
Liquid passion poisons my very mind
As fire seems to rise from the grave of my solicitude…

Can’t you see their crystalline reddish eyes
Which fill my heart with unbearable anxiety?
Can’t you hear their searing screams?
Whispers, haunting weeps… “I fear thee!”

Shades of demons shroud the walls
Sculpting figures of utter dread
I wait patiently as I suffocate
But I know the day will come when distress will be conquered by calm…

Distinguished withered smiles of a blackened dusk
With reddish eyes turn towards me
The quicksilver ceases to corrupt my heart
As it quivers slowly to its end…

Yet I do not feel serene
For your implacable eyes still peer towards me
And your mind is still entwining my figure
Thus my breath’s whirl will never rest…

Acid rain falls upon the darkened forest
Leaving the trees naked in front of the splintered sky
I am nothing but a leaf searching for a branch to lie on
For I cannot face this eradicating fall alone…

Oblivion entreats me not to leave
But my soul will never live with this ethereal hunger
This hunger to run of my execrable fear
Which consumes me as days slowly pass…

Twisted images of black demons haunt my mind
As I lay enclosed by chains in their sight
I cannot help but scream in the face of damnation
Until the dread shall completely profound me…

and another note: Angellore thank you for your comment!
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« Reply #9 on: 29 June 2005, 18:18:09 »

I'm still too shy so I'll send some of my first works in here....
Soon I'll put new lyrics...

AND HERE I STAND

And here I stand
with red roses in my hands
over your grave

And here I stand
with tears in my eyes
over your death grace

I'll fly through this night
to see you praying blind
I'll sing you song of my heart
to see you diving in my love

Come here and stay with me...

When you sleep you have nightmares
not sweet dreams
Come into my arms and you'll find your peace

I'll come all in white to make you
to taste venom from my lips
I'll be poison under your skin
Your desire witihin...

Come here and take me...

We'll swim where the red river flows
lost our souls in a sinful night and thoughts

Come and fly away with me...

And here I stand
with red roses in my hads
over your grave
And here I stand
with tears in my eyes
over your death grace

Life's a journey without ending
But my life-story is over
Your heart's not beating anymore
I'm crawling on the floor
trying to catch last shadows of my memories......
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« Reply #10 on: 01 July 2005, 13:56:54 »

Thank you! :)
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« Reply #11 on: 09 July 2005, 08:28:22 »

OHHHHHHHH Zeraphine and Angellore thank you so much......... :wub:
It si important to me, because The thing i do better is to drawing (soon my website... :P....I hope it become my job! ).....but I like too to singing and writing....expecially goth lyrics....
I love your writing style, you all know too much of english words....


Zeraphine:

"Acid rain falls upon the darkened forest
Leaving the trees naked in front of the splintered sky
I am nothing but a leaf searching for a branch to lie on
For I cannot face this eradicating fall alone…"


I love this part....I think it's so intense...


Angellore: I love "summer sunset" more than the other two poetrys, please,  finish it very soon!!!


Black Wings...it's wonderful....

"And here I stand
with red roses in my hands
over your grave

And here I stand
with tears in my eyes
over your death grace

I'll fly through this night
to see you praying blind
I'll sing you song of my heart
to see you diving in my love"


I love rhymed poetry and I think It's so difficult to write in this way... :)
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« Reply #12 on: 09 July 2005, 08:38:12 »

so....this is a lyrics that i wrote before I saw "interview with the vampire"....i love this movie and I hope you enjoy my poetry!!! It's  rhymed poetry....my first... sorry for every mistake you can find...


The Dark Gift


Don’t be afraid, my beautiful friend
I want to you give the choice
That I’ve never had…
I am the nightmare and a new life
I am not dead but not alive
From this human life I’ll pluck out the pain
And Sickness and Death touch you in vain

Life has no meaning anymore
Do you still want death?
Do you still want decay?
Drink from Me and live forevermore

Please come to me, my beautiful friend
See the morning light for the last time
The moment has come, this is the end
I have drained you to the point of death
Take from this air your last human breath
You must tell me, believe it if I say,
Would you can be young always?

Life has no meaning anymore
Do you still want death?
Do you still want decay?
Drink from Me and live forevermore


“…you’re in love with your mortal nature. You resist the one thing that can give you peace.
The old world, they called it the dark gift, and I gave it to you!” (Lestat)


And now see the world with your vampire eyes
Feel the dark gift, this newborn power
Feel this cold night and don’t tell me lies
You know that the evil is a point of view
I’m the Grim God and now you too
Forget your mortal coil, you'll get use to killing
If you want to survive hold the meaning…

Life has no meaning anymore
Do you still want death?
Do you still want decay?
Drink from Me and live forevermore
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« Reply #13 on: 09 July 2005, 14:21:42 »

Angellore is very very very very beautiful...i love cold and winter...maybe it's too long...but very beautiful...and i love this part:

"The winter moon is shining bleak
Beneath the bare trees
I found thy Roses red
So frail like the winter sun"

this goth landascape it's so frail and pure...i love the opposite between withe and shining moon, so frozen and far, and the warm, dark, close red roses... ^_^
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« Reply #14 on: 10 July 2005, 09:18:34 »

Scarletgothica thanx very much for supporting me...I'm happy that you like my work!
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« Reply #15 on: 10 July 2005, 10:37:08 »

Nothing...it's what i feel...







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« Reply #16 on: 10 July 2005, 16:14:43 »

:)
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« Reply #17 on: 26 July 2005, 13:55:38 »

Another lyrics that I have composed...maybe it's too simple...but it give bleak atmosphere...do you think so?

Cathedral


Remains only liquid wax
When the last candle is burning down
The whisper of a silent prayer
A hidden secrecy blended with smoke.

Bleak sounds cut the air
Harken through a slit of the ancient gate
A melody come from the darkest halls
Mourn of a wailing organ…

…De ventre inferi profundis clamavi
Et vocem meam statim exaudisti
Salvum me fac…et libera me de morte aeterna!

 
The moon trespasses this glasses
And colours play whit the pale marble slab
A strange enchanted game
Where the angels turn into daemons.

Incense soaks the air
Hold its slow, mesmeric sway
Under the shade of a cross
A black maiden reveals all her sins.
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« Reply #18 on: 27 July 2005, 09:37:54 »

Translation:

De ventre inferi profundis clamavi / From the deepest of Hell I screamed in chasmes

Et vocem meam statim exaudisti / and my voice you heard at once

Salvum me fac…et libera me de morte aeterna! / Save me...and set me free from eternal death!


I hope is clear...and my latin is right! :P

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« Reply #19 on: 07 August 2005, 09:32:50 »

I would like to know latin! :(
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