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poem from a broken heart
« on: 11 July 2009, 21:20:10 »

this is a poem I write it a few moment after my break up with my gf

Memories of thou

Thou hath visited me in the night , by a dream turning unto a nightmare
Thy maketh me to sail unto an ocean too deep
Thou art hugging me for a pain who shall lie betwixt my wounds
Thy crusheth me down 'til, I and I woe for my eyes ....
woe my eyes this temple of tears
In vein I giveth her my heart eke my brain , thy turn it insane

a caddisch will , a satanic velin
Craze and making a haze upon her heart I mean -her maze-
Too heavy to take it all upon my shoulders
This bitterness I knew after thy bewitchment
Are all those allusions were just a mockery ?

Illusions I wish to be , a dream not a fatal tragedy
Oh how I suffered and it methinks just a fluey
Naught shalt make me forget her , nay art without her
wherfore thou makest me survive within this pain and thole

Wither I go thy memories go with me , wither I move thy move with me
I mote end this , I wilt rest in peace where there wilt be a place to heal the injuries of thou
where there eart nay memories of you
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There's no skin on my tighs and walking comes hard , if I will let my self to be led as a sheep remors will disappear , but If my speech will be heard it will not be believed , and no pain will be relieved

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Re: poem from a broken heart
« Reply #1 on: 19 July 2009, 18:44:05 »

I would avoid writing in a language you're not very familiar with.
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Re: poem from a broken heart
« Reply #2 on: 31 July 2009, 17:07:43 »

I would avoid writing in a language you're not very familiar with.
why coz U don't understand archaic english ??
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Re: poem from a broken heart
« Reply #3 on: 31 July 2009, 21:59:20 »

No. You should avoid it because you don't know how to use it.
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Re: poem from a broken heart
« Reply #4 on: 14 August 2009, 17:24:10 »

No. You should avoid it because you don't know how to use it.
O'rith do somethin' good n' correct me
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Re: poem from a broken heart
« Reply #5 on: 07 September 2009, 22:21:25 »

I wrote a very short poem titled Broken Heart:


Broken Heart

Stowaway, on a journey afar,
A broken heart piece, patiently waits,
To be, set back in place
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Re: poem from a broken heart
« Reply #6 on: 08 April 2011, 00:34:40 »

Broken Heart

When we fall, we learn to get up again.
When we fall in love, we learn to stay down.
In apathy we can deny the pain,
but a broken heart still beats the same.


* again should be pronounced ''ag-ayn'' so that it rhymes with pain  :)
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